Hey, I actually quite like this! So moody, and I love that Remus won't give up, and how he almost doesn't know how much it's affecting him. If you ever need a beta, I'm almost always available to help people out.

Anyway, I popped on over to your DevArt page, and your art is lovely! I've friended you because of it, I hope you don't mind; let me know if you do! :)