Hmmm... could that have been the ending? That didn't entirely convince me, and there were few things off here and there, (flaws in the characterization, I mean) but there was unexpected force in the dialogue. :D (at the "Jehova witness" I cracked up. Like, a lot.) I think those two have still some way to go, but they seem promising as writers. :D (Or that's just me having a "I have faith in the world!" day. ;P)
Feedback, feedback! I HAVE to send it out this wave. I'm way way too lazy.
Hehehe! Yeah, I like that song very very much. I liked well enough the few O'Connor's songs I've listened to, but this one has captured me from the start. :D You know, that feels (unbelievably) more het-ships inspiring. (Maybe because I just can't imagine Remus and Sirius, you know, dancing all close and cuddled up together :D) The problem though is that I can't see J/L in this, and that's incidentally the only het couple I can think of at the moment. ;P
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on 2005-09-12 01:19 pm (UTC)Feedback, feedback! I HAVE to send it out this wave. I'm way way too lazy.
Hehehe! Yeah, I like that song very very much. I liked well enough the few O'Connor's songs I've listened to, but this one has captured me from the start. :D You know, that feels (unbelievably) more het-ships inspiring. (Maybe because I just can't imagine Remus and Sirius, you know, dancing all close and cuddled up together :D) The problem though is that I can't see J/L in this, and that's incidentally the only het couple I can think of at the moment. ;P