Drabble game.
Oct. 9th, 2003 09:37 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Time for a little game.. Below there's a drabble. The contents are not important, it's more of a "style exercise". Writing it I used some tricks (limitations, shall we say) and I challenge you to find them. There are two to pick up.
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I.
Like.
My work.
My sureness.
What I need is here.
The world is spinning way too fast.
In my office, a version of it I can control.
***
A hint: it's not important the number of words. Try to listen for the rhythm, look through the lines. Come on, it's not that difficult.. *grin*
Yes, I'm sick and I have time to waste. Actually I don't, but I know it sounds like I do. But this idea kept nagging at my mind since when Emanuele made me listen one of Tool's songs.. And if anyone knows them, I've said too much.
(Anyway, it's strange how he immediately translated the group's name in, well, cock. When I didn't think of it at all. Soothing to see I'm not the one who "double-mean" everything, even if someone else tells me otherwise at least once a day. =P)
***
I.
Like.
My work.
My sureness.
What I need is here.
The world is spinning way too fast.
In my office, a version of it I can control.
***
A hint: it's not important the number of words. Try to listen for the rhythm, look through the lines. Come on, it's not that difficult.. *grin*
Yes, I'm sick and I have time to waste. Actually I don't, but I know it sounds like I do. But this idea kept nagging at my mind since when Emanuele made me listen one of Tool's songs.. And if anyone knows them, I've said too much.
(Anyway, it's strange how he immediately translated the group's name in, well, cock. When I didn't think of it at all. Soothing to see I'm not the one who "double-mean" everything, even if someone else tells me otherwise at least once a day. =P)