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The beginning of the infamous third chapter- I'm a lot better at reading than writing, honestly. And I like it more. But I have to finish this damned chapter, and I'd like at least to try to do something passable. This is just a rough draft, though.. not betaed, not re-read, I guess so full of errors and italianism it'll be hard to read.
Anyway, any comment will be welcome. The nastier, the better- really, I work better that way. (Any positive comment'd be obviously welcome as well, mind you.)

( Dawn )

It's long, and it is just the beginning. Whee, that's not a great thing. Every other time it meant I kept going round the questions. There's even more, but I don't have the time to copy it now, maybe later today.
Anyway, I tried not to explain every move and every word.. I thought it was clear enough. Let me know.. please.. ^^"

(I have a doubt- Does Remus call the headmaster "Dumbledore" or "Albus"? Yes, yes, I know, stupid question.)

And I don't have still the slightest idea how to end it. How to end them, actually. Bah.